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Entwined

My heart beats for you in constant motion.
It sings a sweet song of silent devotion.
You hear me crying out at night,
That prayer of your bright light.
There's a ring around you that keeps me out
But I'll break through it without a doubt.
So many words that I can say,
This love grows deeper every day.
It's like a labyrinth of emotion,
Searching for divine seclusion.
Billions hold your heart
But you're the only one who holds mine.
All I hope for is that final moment.
That last glance.
That ending revelation.
That night we set our lives entwined.
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May 1 08.

Thought about having rhyming couplets and everything just fell apart at the end. I just started writing and just let everything flow naturally. Rhyming never was my thing anyway. So, here's one of my favourite poems, maybe 'cos I love love a lot. (:

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:iconmidnight-inertia:
Beautiful!! Makes me cry....:D
:iconsoverysimplelove:
Thanks! I love this poem of mine a lot! (:

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:iconmidnight-inertia:
Yes, you should!! And keep writing! You're good at it!
:iconsoverysimplelove:
Thanks! That means a lot!

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:iconmidnight-inertia:
Sure!! I mean it too Darling!!:D
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:iconsoverysimplelove:
Of course you do! Thanks again! (:

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:iconladysparra:
absolutely lovely

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:iconsoverysimplelove:
Thanks for saying that! I really like this one. And yes, thanks for the fave too! (:

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